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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:46, 21 July 2017 (UTC)

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Moved to mainspace by Royroydeb (talk). Self-nominated at 16:13, 23 June 2017 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - The source for the hook fact is at the end of the end of the paragraph. It should also be at the end of the sentence with the hook in it.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article is written a style of English which I find odd, but I assume that it is acceptable Indian English.
Most of the references were to Hindi-language sources, and since I don't understand Hindi I relied on Google Translate. All of the references checked out, except for one to the Times of India whch I was unable to verify because the webpage would not load: [1] BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 23:51, 17 July 2017 (UTC)

@BrownHairedGirl: I have adressed the issues. RRD (talk) 18:04, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
@Royroydeb: Thanks for that. It looks good, except for two places of unclear text:
  1. "from the to contest from the"
  2. "Hewas also made the party incharge"
In each case the resulting sentence is unclear. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 18:17, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
@BrownHairedGirl: I have now made the changes. RRD (talk) 18:31, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
@Royroydeb: Thanks again. I think that fixes everything, so we're good to go. I added a few categories[2], which I hope you agree are appropriate. If not, feel free to revert or change. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 19:37, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
All issues resolved, so this is good to go. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 19:38, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
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