- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Lightburst talk 01:58, 9 October 2023 (UTC)
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Keith Hartwig
... that Keith Hartwig overcame an injury he was told would end his career in high school and being a backup or injured four of his five collegiate seasons to play in the National Football League?Source: Arizona Daily Star and Tucson Daily Citizen + Pro-Football-Reference.com- ALT1: ... that Keith Hartwig overcame an injury he was told would end his career in high school and went on to play in the National Football League?
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5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:48, 22 September 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Keith Hartwig; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Interesting:
- Other problems:
- Hook is poorly worded and lengthy.
QPQ: 
- Not done
Overall: 
Missing QPQ. To fix the hook issue, I'd remove "and being a backup or injured four of his five collegiate seasons
", but I'm open to other ways to improve the wording. Maybe "... that Keith Hartwig overcame an injury he was told would end his career and went on to play in the National Football League?". ––FormalDude (talk) 08:18, 26 September 2023 (UTC)
- BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:23, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
- Will try to work on this tomorrow. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:15, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
- @FormalDude: QPQ done. I would be fine with your ALT suggestion but maybe change it a little to "... that Keith Hartwig overcame an injury he was told would end his career in high school and went on to play in the National Football League" - I think it a bit more interesting that his career was supposed to be over in high school but he still made it to the NFL. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:25, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
ALT1 approved. ––FormalDude (talk) 22:57, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
- @FormalDude: QPQ done. I would be fine with your ALT suggestion but maybe change it a little to "... that Keith Hartwig overcame an injury he was told would end his career in high school and went on to play in the National Football League" - I think it a bit more interesting that his career was supposed to be over in high school but he still made it to the NFL. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:25, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
- Will try to work on this tomorrow. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:15, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
