Template:Did you know nominations/Joshua L. Goldberg
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:11, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
Joshua L. Goldberg edit
- ... that Joshua L. Goldberg (pictured), the first rabbi to serve as a WWII U.S. Navy Chaplain, had deserted from the Russian Army to fight in the American infantry in France during WWI before attending rabbinical school in New York City?
Created/expanded by NearTheZoo (talk). Self nom at 12:46, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
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..but hook is too long. Suggest ALT2: that Joshua L. Goldberg (pictured) was the first rabbi to serve as a WWII U.S. Navy Chaplain?
-- Chesdovi (talk) 12:11, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
- No problem with ALT2 except that Goldberg's background is *so* unusual that I would hope that something of that "unusualness" could be included.... What about ALT3: that Joshua L. Goldberg (pictured), the first rabbi to serve as a World War II U.S. Navy Chaplain, first fought in the Russian army? NearTheZoo (talk) 12:49, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
- Howabout ALT4: that Joshua L. Goldberg (pictured), the first rabbi to serve as a World War II U.S. Navy Chaplain, deserted the the Russian army during WWI?
- Or ALT5: that Joshua L. Goldberg (pictured), the first rabbi to serve as a World War II U.S. Navy Chaplain, was a Russian army deserter? -- Chesdovi (talk) 15:30, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
- Either one sounds great to me! I'd support the one you like better! Thanks very much. NearTheZoo (talk) 22:33, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
ALT5 good to go. Chesdovi (talk) 11:45, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
- Shall we save this hook for Remembrance Day? --PFHLai (talk) 00:55, 30 October 2011 (UTC)