- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 20:38, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
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Jordan Geller
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Jordan Geller in 2011
- ... that Jordan Geller (pictured) owned 2,388 pairs of sneakers and was recognized by Guinness World Records in 2012 for having the world’s largest sneaker collection? Source: Quartz: "...says Jordan Geller, who in 2012 was recognized by the Guinness Book of World Records as having the world’s largest sneaker collection, at 2,388 pairs."
- ALT1:... that Guinness World Records recognized Jordan Geller (pictured) in 2012 for owning the largest sneaker collection in the world, at 2,388 pairs? Source: Same as above
- ALT2:... that with 2,388 pairs of sneakers, Jordan Geller (pictured) was recognized by Guinness World Records in 2012 for owning the largest collection of sneakers in the world? Source: Same as above
- Comment: Since this is my second DYK nom, I believe I'm exempted from QPQ.
Created by Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk). Self-nominated at 07:04, 26 June 2021 (UTC).
Article was nominated within 7 days of article being published onto mainspace. Prose has at least 1,500 characters. Wording is neutral. I did not find any close paraphrasing issues. This is the nominator's 2nd nomination so a QPQ is not needed at this time. There are no copyright problems with the image provided. All hooks are the same but with different wording. If I were to choose, the main ALT is the best in my opinion. Inline citations are accurately provided but in the Nike Moon Shoes section, they are only cited after each paragraph so some citations are a bit unclear in that regards and should be fixed. lullabying (talk) 03:59, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Lullabying. Thank you for reviewing this. I'm a little confused what you mean about the Nike Moon Shoes section. All the text in the Nike Moon Shoes section (well, technically only the first three paragraphs) are supported by the inline citations at the end of the paragraph. Inline citations are not required for every sentence, and it's quite common to place them at the ends of paragraphs. Did you find text that was not verified from the inline citations? Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 05:54, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
- lullabying I moved the refs in the Moon Shoes section so they're now closer to the text. Is it more clear now? Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 03:43, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Thanks for addressing the issues. It looks good to go. One thing I would note is that it's better to remove the link to Geller's YouTube channel per WP:LINKSTOAVOID 10 and consider including Template:Infobox YouTube personality in its place instead. lullabying (talk) 09:34, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- lullabying I moved the refs in the Moon Shoes section so they're now closer to the text. Is it more clear now? Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 03:43, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Lullabying. Thank you for reviewing this. I'm a little confused what you mean about the Nike Moon Shoes section. All the text in the Nike Moon Shoes section (well, technically only the first three paragraphs) are supported by the inline citations at the end of the paragraph. Inline citations are not required for every sentence, and it's quite common to place them at the ends of paragraphs. Did you find text that was not verified from the inline citations? Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 05:54, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
