Template:Did you know nominations/Joo Koon rail accident

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:07, 17 December 2017 (UTC)

Joo Koon rail accident

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Created by Mailer diablo (talk). Self-nominated at 11:41, 21 November 2017 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: epicgenius (talk) 14:50, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

  • As this is your fifth nomination, no QPQ is required. However, you will need a QPQ for any new nominations.
    Of the two hooks, I'd approve ALT1 because it has less jargon. However, both hooks are a little unclear. The subway station is in Singapore, but the vast majority of casual readers wouldn't know that. How about this: [ALT2 moved above] epicgenius (talk) 14:50, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
  • I'm happy with ALT2 too. Give me a while to work through the other issues. - Mailer Diablo 18:00, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
  • OK, just tell me when you're done with fixing them. epicgenius (talk) 19:27, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Okay, I've cited the hospital line and removed the other one. That should solve the issue. Thank you for reviewing! - Mailer Diablo 20:59, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
  • You're welcome. This nomination is good to go now. epicgenius (talk) 21:13, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Yep. I'm happy with that. - Mailer Diablo 03:23, 12 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Thanks. Restoring tick for ALT3 per epicgenius' review. Yoninah (talk) 14:21, 12 December 2017 (UTC)