Template:Did you know nominations/John Lyman Smith
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:04, 1 July 2019 (UTC)
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John Lyman Smith edit
- ... that after his LDS church mission to Switzerland and Italy, John Lyman Smith, a former Utah territory politician, helped lead immigrants across the Atlantic Ocean and to Salt Lake City? Source:https://lib.byu.edu/collections/mormon-missionary-diaries/about/diarists/john-lyman-smith/
- ALT1:... that John Lyman Smith, a Utah territory politician, traveled to the Salt Lake Valley from Nauvoo, Illinois with the Mormon pioneers in 1846? Source:https://lib.byu.edu/collections/mormon-missionary-diaries/about/diarists/john-lyman-smith/
- Reviewed: John Hamon
- Comment: This article was moved from to the mainspace from my sandbox on May 29, 2019.
Created by Skyes(BYU) (talk). Self-nominated at 17:59, 30 May 2019 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT1 hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. I don't like ALT0 because it reminds me of the Israelites being led across the Red Sea. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:35, 17 June 2019 (UTC)
Maybe a little more description in the hook, like who he is, would make ALT1 hookier. Yoninah (talk) 21:24, 1 July 2019 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: is this better? Skyes(BYU) (talk) 21:32, 1 July 2019 (UTC)
@Skyes(BYU): yes, thank you. Restoring tick per Cwmhiraeth's review. I'm promoting this, but please add an infobox to this and other biographical articles that you write. Yoninah (talk) 22:03, 1 July 2019 (UTC)
