Template:Did you know nominations/Isabella Forshall
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:03, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
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Isabella Forshall edit
- ... that although Isabella Forshall did not go to school she gained two university degrees and four postgraduate diplomas? Source: ""She did not attend school, her education being conducted at home by her mother" "...she qualified MB BS in 1927" "In 1957 she gained the diplomas of MRCS and LRCP. and in 1960 she became FRCSE" "She was elected FRCSEd in 1932"
- Reviewed: James Bruce Lockhart
Created by Iainmacintyre (talk). Self-nominated at 13:25, 9 May 2019 (UTC).
Claiming for review, but I would suggest that the hook may be modified since the hook gives no clue as to what Forshall became best known for (which apparently is medical-related fields). Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:31, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- On the other hand, the article meets requirements, is free from close paraphrasing, has an interesting hook which is verified and cited inline, and a QPQ has been accomplished. Just awaiting a response from the nominator and this should be good to go. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:03, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I've added, as ALT1 and ALT2 the fact that she was a surgeon , which I agree makes the hook more interesting, Source remains the same.
- ALT1:... that although surgeon Isabella Forshall did not go to school she gained two university degrees and four postgraduate diplomas?
- ALT2:... that that although surgeon Isabella Forshall did not go to school she gained two university degrees and four postgraduate diplomas in medicine and surgery? Papamac (talk) 06:17, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks. Both are much better, but I think ALT1 would be the preferable option due to the lack of redundancy; I've added an ALT2a below. I've wikified them as well to make them suitable for DYK. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:06, 15 May 2019 (UTC)
- ALT2a that although Isabella Forshall did not go to school, she gained two university degrees and four postgraduate diplomas in medicine and surgery?
