Template:Did you know nominations/Honor killing of Sadia Sheikh

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:51, 26 December 2011 (UTC)

Honor killing of Sadia Sheikh edit

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... that the honor killing of Sadia Sheikh has been been called Belgium's first honor killing trial?

Reviewed: Compugen [1]

Created/expanded by Plot Spoiler (talk). Self nom at 05:18, 18 December 2011 (UTC)

Please correct your close paraphrase of copyrighted sources, which is a copyright violation. There's also a WP:EVENT (notability) issue, but that's unlikely to be resolved at DYK. –Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 07:51, 18 December 2011 (UTC)

Did some distancing from the sources. Hope this is good enough. If not, please pinpoint what needs to be changed or would be appreciated if you could tweak it yourself. It is admittedly difficult to avoid close paraphrasing, especially when you've become too familiarized with the sources. Plot Spoiler (talk) 16:59, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

Your paragraph beginning "On December 12, 2011" was the one I initially identified as a close paraphrase, so please take another look and make sure everything in the article is your own work. I'm sorry if you feel it's difficult not to insert copyright violations, but that's your job. –Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 17:36, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

Yea, keep up your uncivil attitude. Really appreciated. Plot Spoiler (talk) 17:50, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
Fixed. Plot Spoiler (talk) 17:59, 20 December 2011 (UTC)

It looks better to me now, but I'd like to get the eyes of a more experienced anti-copyvio editor on it before I approve it. I've asked Moonriddengirl to check it out. –Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 18:33, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
It's fine now. Due to MRG's edits which added content, I've asked if she'd like to be co-credited in the DYK; everything else checks out. –Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 01:04, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

Great. She surely deserves it for her valuable additions. Plot Spoiler (talk) 02:24, 22 December 2011 (UTC)

She's replied that it's not necessary. All good to go. –Roscelese (talk ⋅ contribs) 04:26, 22 December 2011 (UTC)