Template:Did you know nominations/Halyna Kuzmenko

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 19:36, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

Halyna Kuzmenko

Improved to Good Article status by Grnrchst (talk). Self-nominated at 16:22, 17 October 2022 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: @Grnrchst: Good article. However, I feel as if the hooks could be a little more interesting. Could you make some better hooks? Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:34, 17 October 2022 (UTC)

@Onegreatjoke: Ok, should I rewrite the above hooks to be more interesting or write new ones based on other sections of the article? --Grnrchst (talk) 17:38, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
You could do either it doesn't really matter. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:44, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
@Grnrchst: Actually, try to rewrite the hooks to be more interesting. I feel as if that could be possible. Onegreatjoke (talk) 22:56, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
@Onegreatjoke: Ok, I rewrote the existing hooks and just for safety added a couple others. Let me know what you think. --Grnrchst (talk) 07:32, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
@Grnrchst: Hooks are much better. just one question, is this one of your first 5 nominations? Onegreatjoke (talk) 12:30, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
@Onegreatjoke: Yes, this is my second nomination after Going to the People. (Third including Elite panic, although I didn't nominate that one myself) --Grnrchst (talk) 12:34, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
@Grnrchst: Alright, approving in good faith. Onegreatjoke (talk) 12:36, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
@Onegreatjoke: you can use the DYK toolbox's "QPQ checker" to figure out how many credits someone has (wouldn't count for failed noms, but hey) :) theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (she/her) 20:37, 18 October 2022 (UTC)