Template:Did you know nominations/Hachim Mastour

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:51, 20 July 2015 (UTC)

Hachim Mastour

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Hachim Mastour

Created by Dudek1337 (talk), Adnan n2 (talk), Perspolis-ghermez (talk), TonyStarks (talk), and The Almightey Drill (talk). Nominated by The Almightey Drill (talk) at 19:08, 14 June 2015 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough and nominated in a timely fashion. While the article is technically long enough at 1520 characters, it seem there is a large quote at Hachim_Mastour#Playing_style. Though it may not have been the intent, I'd like to see the quote paraphrased or the article further expanded to have the 1500 limit not merely met though inclusion of the long quote. Article is written neutrally, and is verifiable, with good faith assumed on the text that relies on non-English sources. The sentence "Born in Reggio Emilia, Italy to Moroccan parents, Mastour joined Milan from hometown club AC Reggiana in July 2012, aged 14." is too close a paraphrase to "Born in Reggio Emilia to Moroccan parents, Mastour joined Milan from AC Reggiana in July 2012, aged 14." from UEFA.com. the image is free, and used in the article.—Bagumba (talk) 08:02, 10 July 2015 (UTC)
Bagumba Copyedited per your suggestions '''tAD''' (talk) 11:59, 10 July 2015 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing concern addressed. Long quote has also been paraphrased, and article further expanded, so length no longer a concern. Good faith approval due to non-English sources used, including the one used for the hook.—Bagumba (talk) 21:45, 12 July 2015 (UTC)