- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:15, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
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Gardner Creek edit
- ... that the first gristmill and the first sawmill in Jenkins Township, Pennsylvania were both built on Gardner Creek?
Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self nominated at 01:47, 28 February 2015 (UTC).
New article, long enough, article is well-sourced, hook facts checked, & QPQ checked. I think it would be appropriate to wikilink gristmill (not a common term), sawmill (many people should know this, but probably good to wikilink for balance with gristmill), and the location Jenkins Township, Luzerne County, Pennsylvania. In my opinion, the way the location appears as three segments looks odd. A quick web search for just "Jenkins Township" (using parentheses to search for results with that exact phrase) and Pensylvania, suggests that this is the only "Jenkins Township" in PA. While I know that township is a subunit of a county, townships are really only common in the midwest & northeastern US and considering the many non-US wikipedia reader, I think it should be ok to use just "Jenkins Township, Pennsylvania" in the hook. Thus turning the hook into:
- ... that the first gristmill and the first sawmill in Jenkins Township, Pennsylvania were both built on Gardner Creek?
- AHeneen (talk) 04:20, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
