Template:Did you know nominations/Foxymorons

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The result was: promoted by 4meter4 (talk) 16:12, 5 February 2016 (UTC)

Foxymorons edit

  • ... that the two members of Texas band the Foxymorons, David Dewese and Jerry James, first met at church camp when they were in high school?

Created by Everymorning (talk). Self-nominated at 14:42, 9 January 2016 (UTC).

  • Good article, well-written. Right length, well-within 7 days. No copyvios (using Earwig's tool). Inline citations are good and they correctly cite the hook. QPQ checked and OK. With just a bit more clarity in one citation there could be an even better hook: " ... that the Texas band the Foxymorons began life as a lie? Musicians David Dewese and Jerry James pretended to be in a band in their teens, but only recorded music together years later." But it's good to go as it is Parkywiki (talk) 13:36, 28 January 2016 (UTC)
  • Struck original hook and verified alternative, as being much more interesting. Jolly Ω Janner 07:26, 2 February 2016 (UTC)