Template:Did you know nominations/Faizrakhmanism

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The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:24, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Faizrakhmanist edit

Created/expanded by Jisnu (talk). Self nom at 21:34, 8 August 2012 (UTC)

This needs better sources - currently the only source is a BBC article. Secretlondon (talk) 23:32, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
Aside from the fact that those sources provided are absolutely reliable, there aren't many available on this subject. This sect only came to attention due to that news incident. We've offered 3 sources anyway. I think that is as good as we can do for a brand new article. Jisnu (talk) 02:23, 26 August 2012 (UTC)
  • The article is new enough and long enough. It now cites four sources (three of which are about this sect). However, I find too-close paraphrasing of the BBC source. For example, see output of duplication detector. This needs to be resolved. --Orlady (talk) 18:14, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
  • I added several sources and content that I found in the new sources, and I reworded parts of the article to address the close paraphrasing. I suggest a revised hook:
I think this is good now, but a new reviewer is needed. --Orlady (talk) 02:36, 29 August 2012 (UTC)
I think this is fine now. Secretlondon (talk) 22:20, 31 August 2012 (UTC)