Template:Did you know nominations/Ellen Jens

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:00, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

Ellen Jens

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Sjef van Oekel

Created/expanded by Drmies (talk). Self nominated at 17:44, 27 August 2013 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough and neutral. Well sourced but AGF on the sources in Foreign, which seem plausible. Hook is supported. 3 out of 4 were flagged as stubs, so I undid that - seems to me that over 1,500 means not a stub. Good to go. The hook is 296 chars. That is only 74 per article so not too long, but how about the 222-character ALT1 below? Aymatth2 (talk) 00:58, 5 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Hmm. Maybe. I suppose. It's just that they are such good names, and I'm not sure you realize that Ge Braadslee and Boy Bensdorp aren't even in there! Anyway, I'll agree, IF you stick "former script girl" back in, for purposes of symmetry etc. (And also, they are there to indicate that Schippers was kind of a career maker.) Drmies (talk) 02:03, 9 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Well, the original hook is o.k., just a bit long. I assume the names means something in Dutch, but they do not have any significance in English. ALT2 below.
  • Yes, every single one of them is a laugh... Drmies (talk) 18:55, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
Aymatth2 (talk) 12:13, 9 September 2013 (UTC)