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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:01, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
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Edin Šehić edit
... that Bosnian footballer Edin Šehić is the youngest footballer to sign a scholarship contract?Source: Source
Created by Royroydeb (talk). Self-nominated at 17:34, 19 January 2018 (UTC).
- The article was created on the date coinciding with the submission.
- The article is over 1,500 characters.
- The article meets core policies and guidelines.
- The hook, at 102 characters, is well below the designated limit.
- The hook is interesting, cited with an inline citation in the article, and neutral.
- QPQ checks out.
Cognissonance (talk) 20:28, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but have 2 questions. Does the source say he is the youngest footballer to sign a scholarship contract in Zagreb, or the world? And do you want to say how old he was? The repetition of "footballer" in the hook should also be fixed. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 00:10, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: The source which is in Croatian, when translated mentions him to be the youngest footballer to achieve the feat (does not mention about the Zagreb one). RRD (talk) 16:04, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
- @Royroydeb: to avoid the repetition in the hook, could we write:
- ALT1:
... that at age 12, Edin Šehić became the youngest footballer to sign a scholarship contract?Yoninah (talk) 23:50, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
- No, I think not. The source is in Croatian and is unlikely to have a world perspective. It's more likely that he was the youngest ever recipient of a scholarship at that club. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:11, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that at age 12, Edin Šehić became the youngest footballer to sign a scholarship contract for NK Zagreb? RRD (talk) 07:24, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
