Template:Did you know nominations/Cokato Temperance Hall

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:13, 1 December 2015 (UTC)

Cokato Temperance Hall edit

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Cokato Temperance Hall

... that the Cokato Temperance Hall was built in 1896 for Finnish Americans who pledged to abstain from alcohol?
ALT1: ... that the Cokato Temperance Hall was the social hub of a Finnish American community even though its members had to pledge to abstain from alcohol?
ALT2: ... that the Cokato Temperance Hall, whose members had to pledge to abstain from alcohol, was the social hub of a Finnish American community?

Created by McGhiever (talk). Nominated by Jonathunder (talk) at 17:45, 9 November 2015 (UTC).

I will be reviewing this nomination. epic genius (talk) 01:23, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: epic genius (talk) 01:23, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

Note: The nominator (but not the article creator) has less than 5 DYK credits, so no QPQ needed.
@McGhiever and Jonathunder: The source for the hook says "The hall was built on one-fourth acre of land bought from the Davo family for $30. Erick Kotila was chairman of the hall’s construction." But it doesn't exactly say that it was built in 1896, just that the society was founded then. epic genius (talk) 01:30, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

A newspaper source gives 1899 for the date built, but other sources, including the NRHP nomination form and a book citation I added to the article give 1896. Jonathunder (talk) 02:07, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

My copious thanks to Jonathunder for the recognition. I'm just wondering if maybe a stronger hook could be "... that the Cokato Temperance Hall was the social hub of a Finnish American community even though its members had to pledge to abstain from alcohol?" -McGhiever (talk) 03:33, 10 November 2015 (UTC)

@Jonathunder: Thanks; I will now mark the hook as "cited," even though new, sourced alternatives have also popped up.

@McGhiever: Yes, That would be a stronger hook than the original. However, I've also suggested ALT2.

Please tell me what you two think about the new "alt hooks," and in meantime, I will get to work on reviewing the article for plagiarism. epic genius (talk) 01:59, 11 November 2015 (UTC)

As per copyvio detector, there does not seem to be any copyright violation of more than 4 words. This nomination is good to go if you agree with either ALT1 or ALT2 within the next day. Otherwise, I will choose ALT1. epic genius (talk) 02:07, 12 November 2015 (UTC)

Thank you, Epicgenius. If possible, I would suggest December 5 as the date to place this on the Main Page, when the society celebrates Pikkujoulu. Jonathunder (talk) 16:24, 27 November 2015 (UTC)