Template:Did you know nominations/Cinta Pertama (2006 film)
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Casliber (talk · contribs) 13:39, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
Cinta Pertama (2006 film) edit
- ... that the director of First Love was used to horror, causing some scenes to be dark and eery?
Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 01:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: Hargreaves Building.
- Comment: "was used to" is passive voice. Instead, state what he used, what he said, or what he did. Remember, there are 200 characters of rendered text to work with. Try two or three ALT hooks. --Lexein (talk) 19:26, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the director of First Love previously directed horror films, causing some scenes to be dark and eery?
- Not much more available. The actress' article is a mess, so it shouldn't be linked to directly from the main page. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:50, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
Date and length ok imo. (In an opera nom the plot was not counted, which would probably render this one also too short.) Indonesian refs AGF. But I would like to see something Indonesian in the hook, and to see the English translation of the title in the article. Suggestion:
- ALT2: ... that the film director of Cinta Pertama (First Love) previously directed horror films, causing some scenes to be dark and eery? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:24, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
