Template:Did you know nominations/Central City Red Zone

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 22:06, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

Central City Red Zone edit

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... that the Central City Red Zone cordon (cordon control point pictured) established after the February 2011 Christchurch earthquake has only just been lifted?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Chełmno Trials

Created by Schwede66 (talk). Self nominated at 19:43, 1 July 2013 (UTC).

Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede sentences have refs; all refs appear to be RS. After spot check, no apparent close paraphrasing issues. Interesting hook; hook length is fine. QPQ is done. Can we tweak the hook's phrase, "has only just been lifted", so that the element of time can be understood in the future? --Rosiestep (talk) 17:35, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the Central City Red Zone cordon (cordon control point pictured) established after the February 2011 Christchurch earthquake was only lifted in June 2013? Schwede 66 01:14, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

Both hooks are verified. Let's go with ALT1. GTG. --Rosiestep (talk) 05:56, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

The original hook is best IMO as topical hooks don't need a date, it will be clear what "only just" means while the hook is on the main page and afterward it will be archived with a time-stamped set. Gatoclass (talk) 16:24, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

I'm ok with that. --Rosiestep (talk) 17:15, 5 July 2013 (UTC)