Template:Did you know nominations/Capture of Arendal
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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:05, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
Capture of Arendal edit
- ... that five days after the unopposed German capture of Arendal, local citizens formed occupied Norway's first organized resistance group?
- Reviewed: Koningin Regentes and De Ruyter
Created by Manxruler (talk). Self nom at 22:25, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
Length; date verified. All non-lead paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent paraphrasing issues, though the two refs which are online are in Norwegian lang. QPQ done. Interesting hook; hook length is fine. Issue: sentence corresponding to the hook lacks an inline citation. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:03, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
- Hi Rosiestep. Thanks for the review. I thought that the sentence "On 14 April, five days after the German invasion of Norway, a number of Arendal's citizens founded the Arendal Group. The Arendal Group is generally regarded as the first organized resistance group in Norway during the Second World War.[21]" did have a reference. Which other sentence should the hook be based on? Manxruler (talk) 06:47, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
- I've now tweaked it to: "On 14 April, five days after the German invasion of Norway and the conquest of their town, a number of Arendal's citizens founded the Arendal Group. The Arendal Group is generally regarded as the first organized resistance group in occupied Norway during the Second World War.[21]" Manxruler (talk) 06:56, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
