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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 13:58, 10 April 2012 (UTC)

Calu Rivero edit

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Created by Bleff (talk). Self nom at 03:16, 5 March 2012 (UTC)

  • Length and date ok. But I find the hook a bit problematic. The reference (btw, the promotional website of the actress in question) doesn't say that she is the first Catamarcan actress ever to be shown on TV, but the more vague 'pantalla nacional'. Probably there have been quite a few Catamarcans that have appeared (at least in minor roles, etc.) in tv shows, but having reached 'pantalla nacional' also implies a degree of fame and recognition. Perhaps an ALT1: "... that Argentine celebrity Calu Rivero (pictured) was named Illustrious Citizen of her hometown Recreo?" --Soman (talk) 12:05, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
  • I found more sources supporting the fact she was the first actress from Catamarca to appear in national television. Some other sources I found state that she was named Illustrious Citizen for appearing in national television, although not necessarily the first actress from Catamarca to do so. Perhaps an ALT2: "... that Argentine celebrity Calu Rivero (pictured) was named Illustrious Citizen of her hometown Recreo for appearing in national television?"
  • I support the second hook, the original one is too long Cambalachero (talk) 03:09, 9 April 2012 (UTC)
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