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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hilst talk 11:22, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

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Created by Panamitsu (talk). Self-nominated at 10:36, 5 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/BrewGroup; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • New enough and long enough, nicely sourced with no NPOV, BLP or copyvio issues in evidence. Hook is interesting and well sourced. NZ has freedom of panorama, so the image checks out. There are, however, a few spit-and-polish matters which should be addressed before promotion: firstly, in New Zealand is better grammar in the hook: secondly, there are quite a few grammatical errors in the article which can be fairly easily fixed. A sample:
  • Its tea brands gives
  • R. Wilson and Co (full stop after one abbreviation, not the other)
  • The costs were at over $1 million
  • The author of one of the sources is listed as "sarah" (lc), another as "says, Leslie dyer" (also lc).

UndercoverClassicist T·C 18:58, 7 March 2024 (UTC)

  • Thanks, good eye. I've edited the hook as you've suggested, and have made a few copyedits. QPQ added too. —Panamitsu (talk) 09:35, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Thanks -- I didn't see those fixing edits. Now Approved to go. UndercoverClassicist T·C 20:08, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
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