Template:Did you know nominations/Abul Qasim Husayn ibn Ruh al-Nawbakhti

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:49, 1 June 2016 (UTC)

Abul Qasim Husayn ibn Ruh al-Nawbakhti edit

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~~... that Husayn ibn Ruh, the third deputy of Muhammad al-Mahdi, was native of Qum, Iran?~~

ALT1:...that Husayn ibn Ruh, the third deputy of Muhammad al-Mahdi, was companions of al-Mahdi’s father?
ALT2:...that during the period of second deputy, Husayn ibn Ruh, the third deputy, was the connection link between second deputy and another Shia leaders?

5x expanded by Homiho (talk). Self-nominated at 12:09, 2 May 2016 (UTC).

The article is long enough (2776 B) and was expanded 5x in the legal time. The hooks are referenced immediately at the end of sentences but the sources of hooks are not appropriate for DYK. The hooks are below 200 characters. The article needs to be copy edited. Copyvio detector does not reveal any copyright violation.Saff V. (talk) 12:08, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

@Saff V.: Why do you say the sources are not appropriate? the sources specially for main ALT are from famous authors.Homiho (talk) 15:38, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Homiho Jassim M. Hussain is famous writer but the information of source is incomplete. Also, source of ALT1 is unknown.Saff V. (talk) 05:45, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

@Saff V.: I added a new source for ALT2 from Sachedina and completed the source of main ALT. About copy edit, I enrolled the article for copy edit before nomination for DYK. Homiho (talk) 07:18, 8 May 2016 (UTC)

Homiho Source of main hook is OK but ALT hooks have source problem. Please add source of main hook at the end of sentence in the biography section and lead. Also, separate this sentence "also he was a member of al-Nawbakhti family who had the high position amongst Banu Abbas" from hook sentence in the article. I suggest this hook:

ALT3:...that Husayn ibn Ruh, the third deputy of Muhammad al-Mahdi, was from Nawbakhti family who had high position in the Abbasid court? Saff V. (talk) 12:00, 11 May 2016 (UTC)

@Saff V.: Done!Homiho (talk) 09:41, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

@Homiho: Please add one source at hook's sentence. Which reference is for hook, 4 or 6?Saff V. (talk) 10:05, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

@Saff V.: reference 6Homiho (talk) 10:20, 14 May 2016 (UTC) But I prefer main hook.Homiho (talk) 10:22, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

I checked thees sources, 4 is main hook and 6 for ALT3. You must add source number four at the end of sentence. I done. Please check for copy edit.Saff V. (talk) 10:26, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

@Saff V.: Hello! the copy-edit was completed.Homiho (talk) 12:56, 24 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks. ALT3 GTG. Saff V. (talk) 07:33, 31 May 2016 (UTC)