Template:Did you know nominations/Żegota Monument in Warsaw
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:01, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
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Żegota Monument in Warsaw
Żegota Monument in Warsaw
... that the Żegota Monument in Warsaw (pictured) was unveiled by Władysław Bartoszewski, the last survivor of that organization, which was dedicated to rescue of Jews during the Holocaust?Source: https://sztetl.org.pl/en/towns/w/18-warszawa/116-sites-of-martyrdom/52023-zegota-memorial-zamenhofa-street
- Reviewed: Blaesilla
Created by Piotrus (talk). Self-nominated at 11:05, 28 July 2020 (UTC).
Solid article on good sources, Polish sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed, and while we don't see details that size, it gives a good impression. - I am not happy with the wording of the hook. The fact is fine, but we ignorants (until we read further) don't know yet that Żegata is an organisation, - it needs at least be linked, but perhaps better be mentioned by name. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:14, 9 August 2020 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: How about ALT1a below? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 14:36, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the Żegota Monument (pictured) in Warsaw was unveiled by Władysław Bartoszewski, the last survivor of that Żegota organization, which was dedicated to rescue of Jews during the Holocaust?
- I like that much better, my version would be
- ALT1a: ... that the Żegota Monument (pictured) in Warsaw was unveiled by Władysław Bartoszewski, the last survivor of Żegota, an organization dedicated to rescue Jews during the Holocaust? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:59, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
those 2. I wonder why the article isn't called Żegota Monument, Warsaw? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:59, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Thanks, I am fine with the minor grammar revision for the ALT1a. As for the name of the article, I am unsure what is the MoS preference. I have no objections to a move (a quick review suggests that 'in Warsaw' is not common, most monuments indeed follow the 'x, Warsaw' style, a few use '(Warsaw)' style too like Tomb of the Unknown Soldier (Warsaw). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:42, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
- You decide, move to one of those, but don't move this nomination, only the links in the hooks, and ping Mandarax for the rest. What I care about is that it doesn't get moved while on the Main page (which one of the MOS-knowers would do). In the hooks, you will have to decide if Warsaw is in the bold link or not, - "in" makes for a longer bold, but Warsaw is probably not part of the name. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:18, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Thanks, I am fine with the minor grammar revision for the ALT1a. As for the name of the article, I am unsure what is the MoS preference. I have no objections to a move (a quick review suggests that 'in Warsaw' is not common, most monuments indeed follow the 'x, Warsaw' style, a few use '(Warsaw)' style too like Tomb of the Unknown Soldier (Warsaw). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:42, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
