Talk:Worshipful Company of Scientific Instrument Makers
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Improvements edit
I think a few things can be improved here:
- Avoid promotional tone. My first thought on reading this was that it had been copied and pasted from their website. As far as I can tell it hasn't but this sounds as if it is very much written in their voice, which is not an encyclopaedic tone.
- Get some independent inline references.
- Say something about its coat of arms. (Can use this as a reference: http://www.wcsim.co.uk/about/our-history/our-coat-arms/ )
--DanielRigal (talk) 22:32, 6 September 2017 (UTC)
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