Talk:Wooloo

Latest comment: 8 months ago by Brachy0008 in topic GA Review

There’s really no use for this article edit

I really don’t know why this page really exists. I mean, what’s the purpose…? Sure, it was fan-influential, but I whymake a Wikipedia article for this pokemon in particular? What are you planning to do, make articles for ‘em all? I don’t know…I think this is useless as long as Bulbapedia exists.. Inaturlist Lover (talk) 12:18, 23 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wololo! Panini! 🥪 22:44, 10 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 09:23, 10 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Review edit

Hello! I will be reviewing the article. I am honoured to do so, as I’m kind of a Pokémon fan myself (guess my favourite Pokémon if you want to, but I can confirm it is not Wooloo). So far, the significant problem is the MoS violations.

Prose edit

  • A mention of Shigeru Ohmori’s reaction to the critical reception of the Pokémon is not present in the prose, despite being in the lead.
    • It should be there, first paragraph of reception, by his last name.
      •   Done!

Sources/Citations edit

  • (Optional) Try adding secondary sources, but I’ll leave them be if such sources are not available. I helped you with one of them.
  • The only concern, the overuse of FN 7 (primary source). It’s used four times on this page.
    • Should be fixed now. Fixed an oversight with a few missing accessdate.
      •   Done.

Copy-vios edit

  • Nothing special from Earwig, but I’ll let that 26.5% be.

Images edit

  • So far, so good!
  • (Optional) If you can, try adding more Wooloo pics.
    • I fear given the size of the article adding more than one might get called out for fair use rationale if I add another.
      • That’s why it’s optional

@Brachy0008: Everything should be addressed!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 10:06, 10 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Very well then, I will pass it. Brachy08 (Talk) 10:10, 10 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
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