Talk:Welland Canal Riot
Peer Review edit
Hi Drew! Make sure the first section of your article provides a summary of events before the "background" section.
Background section
Avoid any claims that aren't from secondary sources, such as "The only way this would get approved was through proving it to be useful."
Need citations throughout this section.
Events section/Outcomes
Similar to above, avoid large sections without citation. Use the citation tool in the wiki visual editor rather than parenthetical citations. Dor13ian (talk) 23:13, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
Peer Review/my insights edit
Hey, I think you're going in the right direction. You have a lot of info to work with, but I suggest it should be narrowed down to a more specific riot that happened. There were a few mentioned in the events section, so specifying it would be best.
Having the parentheses with the source is a good guide, but formal citations will be needed, especially with the amount of information you have.
Maybe having another source, if you can find one, to work with can help guide and specify which riot you're talking about in the events section. JuliRod180 (talk) 06:29, 3 March 2024 (UTC)