Talk:Wali Mohammed Wali

Assessment

Quite close to a B. The last paragraph about his life sounds a little too cheesy and can be rewritten. Also have corrected a few gramatical errors. Can extoll more about the social importance of Wali's poetry, Wali's inspirations etc. devil 06:16, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

His Death and Grave

His death details and about his grave can be added in a separate section. The breaking of his grave and building a road on it is more significant. A picture of the tarred road and its GPS location on the map also will be better. The worldwide reactions on breaking and building road can also be of more important, about how more he is remembered by the world. HotWick (talk) 22:21, 23 August 2011 (UTC)

Assessment comment

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I agree with devil's assessment. Article is quite close to "B class". The major drawback is that it is not citing any reliable references. Also information on literary and historical significance of his work is insufficient. I have rated high on importance scale because this article is about an important poet, whose work is literary and historically very significant.

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