Talk:Victoria Skating Rink/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Grsz11 in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Here's some more for you:
- "rich, English, industrialists" - excessive commas.
- Link Windsor Hotel.
- Some "is"'s need changed to "was"'s in the Building section.
- "An quote" → "A quote"
- Some wikilinks missing, like Montreal Hockey Club, Nova Scotia.
- When explaining the nine man limit, the fact that there were no substitutions could probably be added into the sentence rather than in parenthesis.
- I understand the "slapshot north" reference in Location Today, but casual reader may not.
- Section headers don't have two capitals per WP:MOS - Current Events and Location Today.
- ISBN for other books?
Hope that helps. Grsztalk 19:58, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
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