Hi @Spasage:. I was hoping you could offer some points on the parts of the article you feel read like an advert. I have tried to take some care in ensuring the article was acceptable, as it was subject to an AfD discussion. Thanks. --Natural RX 17:09, 31 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
- Text in lead and Features section require some rewrite. May be rename features heading with something else. It will be good, if some other people write this article as well. --Spasage (talk) 18:44, 31 January 2018 (UTC)Reply
- I have removed a trivial section and tweaked some language, seems to be more of an stripped down start-class article now. If you see any further issues, please be bold, but I think it is neutral. --Natural RX 16:18, 2 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
