Talk:Undertale/GA2
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Anarchyte in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Anarchyte (talk · contribs) 02:15, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
I presume the nominators want a quick but in-depth review, since GA1's result was reversed. Anarchyte (work | talk) 02:15, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
Section review edit
Overall comments/Misc edit
- There was a 32.4% similarity rating with this page but it took its content from Wikipedia.
- Is it Underground or underground? In the lead, the word underground is capitalised but in the gameplay sections, they're all lowercase. Please specify this. Anarchyte (work | talk) 03:41, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
Lead edit
- Everything is fine here.
- I made 2 minor edits to the lead in this edit. I added a comma and removed a wikilink which had already been linked. Anarchyte (work | talk) 03:41, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
Gameplay edit
- In the game, players control a child, and complete objectives to progress through the story.
- Save points frequently appear in the world, refilling players' health while saving their progress.
- Reference 1 is by JayIsGames and according to WP:VG/S, it is situationally reliable, when the article is written by Jay Bibby. This article is written by "Dora", so I'm unsure about its reliability. Can someone please double check the reliability of this site? With this said, everything said in the first paragraph is referenced by this source. Anarchyte (work | talk) 03:41, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
- There's no reason for the 3rd reference to be after the first line in the 2nd paragraph. The 2nd reference does a good job at covering everything said. It's mentioned 1 line later, anyway.
- For some boss encounters to be completed peacefully,
- Monsters will converse with players during battle, and the game updates players on the monster's feelings and actions.
Plot edit
- Underground or underground? (See #Overall comments/Misc)
- When Asriel returned their body to the humans, they attacked and killed him, leading Asgore to declare war
Development edit
- A statistic could be added here, after The campaign was launched on June 25, 2013 with a goal of US$5,000; it ended on July 25, 2013, with US$51,124 raised by 2,398 people.
- Reword The idea for the game originated when Fox created a battle system using the game creation system GameMaker: Studio, which Undertale followed.
- Ref17 (Existential Gamer) isn't listed at WP:VG/S
- Ref18 (seagaia) is a WP:BLOG and is probably unreliable. Isn't listed at WP:VG/S either
- Those two are interviews. They're fine to use. GamerPro64 16:48, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
Game design edit
- Everything's fine here
Writing edit
- See above message about Ref18
Music edit
- Everything's fine here
Release edit
- Everything's fine here, I don't see any way this could be expanded or chaged
Reception edit
- The comparison (in the 4th reference) to Cave Story could probably been included towards the end
- Done, I think. Unsure how exactly you want this to be implemented.--IDVtalk 00:27, 16 May 2016 (UTC)
- @IDV: Not entirely necessary, but I meant something along the lines of "Destructoid writer Ben Davis gave Undertale a 10/10 and compared it to Cave Story, as it handles its mechanics in the same manner". Anarchyte (work | talk) 06:37, 16 May 2016 (UTC)
- Done, I think. Unsure how exactly you want this to be implemented.--IDVtalk 00:27, 16 May 2016 (UTC)
- Remove Ref43. Unnecessary, it's not used anywhere else and there are already 2 more references referencing that cult statement. Cliqist also isn't listed on WP:VG/S.
Accolades edit
- Everything's fine here
Overall review edit
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: (Passed)
- Pass or Fail: (Passed)
Putting on hold until the errors get responses/fixed. Anarchyte (work | talk) 07:00, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
- @Anarchyte: I left two replies with questions above, under #Overall comments/Misc and #Reception, but other than that I think all points have been fixed or otherwise addressed now.--IDVtalk 01:33, 16 May 2016 (UTC)