Talk:Ujjal Dosanjh/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by Arsenikk in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- The last sentence, about his full name is vital, and should either be in the lead or in the "early life" section. The phrase "for those interested" is highly unprofessional and unencyclopedic and should be avoided.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- I cannot understand how his signature can be the work of the US government.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
I am passing the article. It is well-written, but if you have ambitions of FA, you may need to lengthen it. Concerning the signature, it might be possible to use it under fair use (but I am no good with copyright status, so don't take my word for it). Arsenikk (talk) 10:37, 11 May 2009 (UTC)