Talk:Ugly (Fantasia song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:04, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

I'm actually pretty familiar with Fantasia so I'll take this one up.

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

Initial comments

• I don't think the "For other uses" tab is necessary since "Ugly (Fantasia song)" is pretty specific enough

• Makes sense; removed. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• Link "Brentwood" in the infobox 'studio' parameter

• Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• You should include that 19 Recordings and RCA handled the release in the lead

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• Perhaps you'd like to add the years to After Midnight?

• Sorry, forgot about this comment. Added the year in which she appeared in the musical as that is the most relevant part. Aoba47 (talk) 21:35, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• Should R&B be added as a genre? It seems like a lot of critics are making the comparison

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• I don't think you need to link "So Blue" since it just redirects to The Definition Of...

• Makes sense. Removed. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• Ref #11 has the author's name spelt differently than how it appears in the text "Mcpherson" vs "Macpherson"

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• "described it as an improvement to her previous single "No Time for It" (2016)." --> The way this is set up makes it sound like "Ugly" was released as a commercial single too when it was just promo; I'd just say "improvement to her single"

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• I would archive Ref #21 since sometimes iTunes removes non-singles for whatever reason

• Archived. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• I'm not so sure that #22 is reliable enough for inclusion here; what do you think?

• Removed from "Reception" section and replaced in the other instances. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

Well written and sourced. Ping me with any questions. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 21:04, 28 August 2017 (UTC).

• @Carbrera: Thank you! I am actually really proud of this article. I have addressed all of your comments. I am looking forward to your feedback. Aoba47 (talk) 21:27, 28 August 2017 (UTC)