Talk:USS Shipley Bay/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:14, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
Review comments edit
- As with the other reviews I've done on these escort carriers, the namesake information should be in the main body of article
- Mention battle stars in main body
- Reorder cites at end of first paragraph of design description into numerical order
- Decommissioning date in infobox doesn't match what is described in service history
- The Samples ref should be listed in the bibliography - no page for cite?
- Image tags check out OK
- Dupe link - kamikaze - first used in design & description section, second usage in service history
That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 10:14, 21 December 2019 (UTC)