Talk:U.S. Route 141/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 00:01, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I wanted to finish my review of I-75 first, but I guess I can start this now. TCN7JM 00:01, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

Infobox

• I'm guessing the semicolons indicate the counties in which the highway switches states multiple times. Is there some kind of standard that says this should be done? It looks pretty weird otherwise.

Route description

• You seem to be missing a word in the second sentence.
• This area is mostly residential with some businesses along Velp Avenue. I don't really see why you need to mention again that the route is on Velp Avenue, as it's done in the previous two sentences. It sounds awkward anyway.
• Maybe describe what M-28 does at the northern terminus? A confused reader could interpret that M-28 also terminates.

Putting these up for now. I'll finish in a little while. TCN7JM 01:03, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

History

• Segments that later became for US 141 - wha?
• US 8's eastern end was rerouted along a separate bridge over the Menominee River to a new terminus at an intersection with US 8 - It ends at itself?
• Another freeway section, north of Green Bay to Suamico was opened in 1971. I'd replace the comma with the word "from".
• I'm not sure I like the usage of "four-laned" as a verb in the last sentence.

Okay that'll be all. This one's going on hold for you to fix the issues. Most importantly, have fun! TCN7JM 01:40, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

All changed. Thanks for the review! Imzadi 1979 → 04:30, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

Not a problem! I'm passing the article now that you've addressed my concerns. Great job. TCN7JM 04:52, 21 March 2013 (UTC)