Talk:Tudur Hen/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:32, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

• Tudur the Eldar typo? And here: later interned on

• Fixed. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

• Link seneschal

• Added. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

• with the Welsh forces the English invasion of Gwynedd missing word?

• Added the missing "during". Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

• In September 1278, lands were restored by King Edward I of England to Tudur and his brothers When had they been seized?

• I was having an odd day with my wording I think - changed to "granted". Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

• who sided with use a synonym for "sided" as it's in close proximity to another example.

• Switched to "joined". Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

• English in 1294-95 use an endash between date ranges.

• Forgot to run the dash fixer - all sorted now. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

• it was proposed that Tudur "has been" instead of "was"

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

• Tudur used the English property laws, which he found more advantageous in his position than those used by the Welsh. How so?

• Added an explanation - the Welsh laws would have required him to split up his lands between his sons. The English property laws allowed for inheritance by his eldest son only. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for reviewing. Let me know if there is anything else. Miyagawa (talk) 22:43, 25 April 2016 (UTC)