Talk:Tropical Storm Lowell (2008)

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Nicely done HurricaneSpin, there are a couple of things that need to be done before I can up the article to C-class though.

• The lead needs to be just a bit longer and it doesn't need a reference
• The MH section could use a copyedit (if no one else does, I'll get around to it this afternoon)
• There should be more preparations, such as evacuations, shelters opened, port closures, etc... \
• Definitely needs more Mexican impact. If you can't find much using english sources, try using the Google Language tool and search for Storm Lowell Damage in spanish
• If possible, add an aftermath section

Cyclonebiskit 11:29, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

There are some problems. First, I removed the image of the wave separating with Hanna. The TCR only says that Hanna developed from the northern portion of the wave on August 28th. As the image was from the 27th, it was original research. I'm very confused why either image was placed in the middle of the sentence, but I fixed it. The impact section is currently a copy of the TCR. That's adequate, but for the article to be any better, the prose should be used and summarized, instead of copied. All in all, more info is needed, as is some copyediting. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:10, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

I found http://www.zocalo.com.mx/seccion/articulo/tormenta-tropical-lowell-activa-alerta-en-el-pacifico. Is there really 6 deaths? Hurricane Typhoon Cyclone 20:58, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

No, and also post-tropical Lowell is just a rain storm and does not need much coverage in a tropical cyclone article. Potapych (talk) 14:21, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

Why not? What do you think the focus of the article should be then? It did not do much to BCP. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 15:36, 25 July 2011 (UTC)