Talk:Tropical Depression Nineteen-E (2018)/GA1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:20, 6 December 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:20, 6 December 2018 (UTC)

• "Tropical Depression Nineteen-E was a weak tropical cyclone that caused flooding throughout Western Mexico and is the first known tropical cyclone to have formed over the Gulf of California." Comma needed in the middle.
  • Fixed. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 11:31, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "Tropical Depression Nineteen-E originated" Don't repeat the same three words in consecutive sentences. Shorten to like Nineteen-E or something.
  • "We had a dispute about that... I changed it since a senior project member said it was wrong as Nineteen-E is not a name, but I think that will be fine after seeing some TD GAs with something similar. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 19:33, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "on September 6 to 7" So which day exactly?
  • I simply gave what the TCR had. They had "by 6–7 September". Figfires^{Send me a message!} 11:31, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "A surface trough developed over the Baja California peninsula on September 18." And what does that have to do with Nineteen-E?
  • Explained this better. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 11:42, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "and then having" Remove "then".
  • Fixed. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 11:58, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "Despite negative projections" You mean "not being expected to organize"?
  • Changed that. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 11:58, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "the disturbance organized into a tropical depression at 12:00 UTC" How?
  • NHC did not say how it occurred. They only said that it occurred at 12:00 UTC, after they no longer expected genesis. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 11:58, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "Six hours later, as the tropical cyclone moved over rough terrain in the Mexican state of Sonora, the tropical depression quickly dissipated after its convection took on a more linear look and the system lost its closed surface circulation." Run-on.
  • Split into two sentences. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 16:19, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "Macrosimulacro 2018" What is that and why is it significant to be included here?
  • Gave a brief explanation in the sentence about what it is. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 21:06, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• Values of rainfall should replace the ones in the impact section.
  • I already used the rainfall totals from the TCR Figfires^{Send me a message!} 16:19, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• Link the first mention of a town, and de-link the second mention of each.
  • Think I got all of them... Figfires^{Send me a message!} 21:06, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "In total, 58 thousand jobs were impacted, and over 500 thousand birds and 15 thousand heads of cattle, goats, and pigs were killed and swept away by the currents of engorged rivers." Remove the first "and".
  • Actually, this "and" is correct. This is not a list of three items. The two items after the ",and" are together. Would be "Over 500 thousand birds and 15 thousand heads of cattle, goats, and pigs were killed and swept away by the currents of engorged rivers" if it was not combined with the first part. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 21:09, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• "Federal Highway 15" Link needed.
  • Done... linked on the first mention of the highway in the Sonora paragraph. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 21:06, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• Authors needed for some references.
  • Some sources do not have authors. Either nothing is listed or it has admin/the site staff as the writer. Admin/site staff simply does not qualify as an author. Figfires^{Send me a message!} 16:21, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
• Reference dates need to be consistent.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:41, 14 December 2018 (UTC)