Talk:Tropical Depression Eight (1981)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 01:58, 6 August 2017 (UTC)
- "...the remnant low resumed its northeastward motion, before entering Louisiana and dissipating on September 1." - Comma is unnecessary.
- "and damage or deroofed several homes and buildings, including at the Strand Historic District." - Damaged.
- You use "about" in the impact section frequently. Try to alternative words.
- "All creeks exceeded their banks and the Guadalupe and San Marcos rivers rising sharply" - Rising --> rose
- "The Boggy Creek after exceeded its banks" - Eh?
- "In Galveston, flooding primarily effected the first floor of buildings damaged by the tornado." Affected
Otherwise, this article looks in good shape. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:58, 6 August 2017 (UTC)