Talk:Transpirational cooling (biological)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by EMsmile in topic Name of article?

Name of article?

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Do we need (biological)? If change name probably need to change link in the excerpt I have added in transpiration Chidgk1 (talk) 07:30, 8 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

I think it's probably good to have "biological" in the title as otherwise it could be confused with this similar sounding article title: Transpiration cooling (?). EMsmile (talk) 10:31, 8 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

You might like to add cites to lead

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so that they appear in transpiration Chidgk1 (talk) 07:38, 8 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Some content is more essay like, not encyclopedic

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From a quick look at the article (haven't yet studied it in detail), I find these too sentences problematic as they seem "essay like" to me: