Talk:Touch My Body/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Rp0211 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk2me) 05:09, 8 August 2011 (UTC)Reply


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:  
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:  
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:  
    B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):  
    C. It contains no original research:  
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:  
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):  
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:  
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:  
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  


Infobox
  • No issues
Lead
  • ...held throughout 2009-10. – Make it "held throughout 2009 and 2010."
Background and release
  • ...and to digital outlets on March 24. – Specify year
Composition
  • According to the sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by W.B.M. Music Corporation... – It's actually Sony/ATV Music Publishing
  • The song follows in the chord progression of Bm7–Am7–Gmaj7[22] – Add period at end
Critical reception
  • No issues
Chart performance
  • No issues
Remixes
  • No issues
Music video
  • No issues
Live performances
  • No issues
Cover version
  • No issues
Track listings and formats
  • No issues
Credits and personnel
  • No issues
Charts and certifications
  • No issues
See also
  • No issues
References
  • Reference 15 – The Daily Telegraph is already wiki-linked in Reference 13
  • References 20, 23 – Fix format

Overall review edit

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. This article is very close to reaching good article status and has only minor mistakes keeping it away from it. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or discuss items you believe do not GA status until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 20:42, 8 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

Done! Thanks for the review :)--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 20:51, 8 August 2011 (UTC)Reply
Good job on responding to the issues quickly. Since all of them have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 21:26, 8 August 2011 (UTC)Reply