Talk:Tinder Fire/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:22, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

Looks interesting! I will be able to get to this later today. ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:22, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

Should be all! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns otherwise I may not respond. Thanks! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 18:30, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

Nice work! Happy now to pass this article for GA status per the changes implemented. Congrats on another fire GA! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 21:10, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go.

Files

All images are relevant, of acceptable quality, and copyright-free:

File:2018 04 30-17.41.49.915-CDT.jpg: valid public domain rationale;

File:USA Arizona location map.svg: CC-BY-SA 3.0.

Prose

• "orders for 1000 houses" – recommend "1,000" for consistency with the sizes formatting. Likewise for its mention in § Fire.
  •  Done –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 20:47, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
• "from the 2017 season" – change to "from the 2017 wildfire season" for clarification.
  •  Done –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 20:47, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
• "2018 wildfire season in Arizona and New Mexico." – I would wiki Arizona and New Mexico since you wikilink Arizona in the lead.
  •  Done –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 20:47, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
• "Within the day," – is an alternative word choice available to avoid repeating within from the previous sentence?
  •  Done –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 20:47, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

Refs

Passes spotcheck on refs 6, 9, 17 and 23.

Other

Short desc, coords, infobox, External links, nav and cats good to go.

• Please add WP:ALT text to the infobox image.
  •  Done –♠Vamí_IV†♠ 20:47, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.