Talk:Tickertape Parade
Latest comment: 11 months ago by Ineedtofinishmyschoolwork in topic POV Dispute
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POV Dispute edit
The verbiage in this article is unacceptable. Some problematic pieces:
> burned out quickly before really establishing itself
> could not help by note
> It seems the band's attorney ... and Managers ... seemed to lose interest in the band and jumped ship
> they just could not make it happen
> they were essentially "excommunicated"
See Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Words_to_watch
In addition, the views expressed here are not at all balanced. There is no counterweight to the blatant advocacy for the band's talent, even though there's plenty of material for that even in the sources already cited. 174.21.145.126 (talk) 20:30, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
- So glad I found this. 68.109.176.227 (talk) 01:11, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- i removed ″but burned out quickly before really establishing itself″. the sentence would still make sense since it′s in past tense. Ineedtofinishmyschoolwork (talk) 14:21, 13 June 2023 (UTC)