Talk:Thou Art the Man

Latest comment: 16 years ago by GeeJo in topic Lead section

New article edit

We should try to get this up to Did You Know? quality so it can be featured on the main page! We only have a few days, so hopefully we can add sources, etc. asap! --Midnightdreary 16:25, 26 October 2007 (UTC)Reply

Lead section edit

The lead section keeps getting tagged with requests for citations, clarification, etc. I'm trying to follow guidelines in WP:LEAD as best I can. But, also, as a general practice, most intros are not bogged down with citations. According to WP:LEAD#Citations in the lead section, citations are only needed for contentious or possibly contested info. I don't really see anything particularly scandal-arousing or controversial about the lead in "Thou Art the Man." Could someone help me out here? --Midnightdreary 13:49, 31 October 2007 (UTC)Reply

I suspect the problem is with the "perhaps", which does smack a bit of weasel wording. I'd either change it to a more certain statement, or link the citation used farther down the page at the end of the sentence. GeeJo (t)(c) • 14:18, 3 November 2007 (UTC)Reply