Talk:The Sleepers (poem)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Eddie891 in topic Versioning

Did you know nomination edit

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The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 12:30, 16 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Walt Whitman's poem "The Sleepers" contains "one of the most powerful and evocative passages about slavery in American literature"?
    • ALT1:... that Walt Whitman's 1855 poem "The Sleepers" initially contained his most direct condemnation of slavery, but he removed it in later publications?

Created by Eddie891 (talk). Self-nominated at 01:50, 12 April 2021 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: Done.
Overall:   Accepting offline sources in good faith (not used in hook). GeneralPoxter (talk) 16:28, 15 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Versioning edit

Since the poem has so many versions (as explained in the article), maybe preface all quotes with the edition they're taken from? The quotes mentioning the whale don't appear to be in any version of the poem I can find online, e. g. Gutenberg, poetry.com, poemhunter.com. IAmNitpicking (talk) 19:17, 21 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

IAmNitpicking, I'd consider an early version of the metaphor in Whitman's notebook to be pretty clear attribution of where that quote comes from (it's from his notebook, not the finished version of the poem) Eddie891 Talk Work 15:12, 5 May 2021 (UTC)Reply