Talk:The Show Where Sam Shows Up
Latest comment: 11 years ago by George Ho in topic GA Review
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on July 7, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the bartender and the psychiatrist were good ol' mates in Boston and are still good ol' mates in Seattle? |
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Family edit
Were jokes about Frasier not having mentioned Niles and saying his father was dead references to retconning his family background when starting "Frasier"?
"becomes aghasted" edit
Maybe someone who's seen the episode could improve this.--Wetman (talk) 01:04, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:21, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
- Infobox: Remove notes from who it is produced by
- Infobox: Suppose to be running time without commercials, not with
- Infobox: Remove "Season 2 episodes" area, and add to episode list with Frasier (season 2) then List of Frasier episodes below it on a different line.
- Lede: Summarize every section per WP:LEAD, mainly summarize the "Reception" section
- Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
- Lede: Link sitcom
- Lede: Remove unneeded comma before Frasier
- Plot: Remove File:Martin Rises from the Dead Show Where Sam Shows Up.jpg. It doesn't help me understand article at all.
- Plot: Remove File:A Dirty Little Secret Frasier Sam Shows Up.jpg. It doesn't help me understand article at all.
- Production: Or, rather a lack of one. Considering that this is a rather short article to begin with, a production section is a must. You mention that the episode was written by "by Ken Levine and David Isaacs, and directed by James Burrows. And, the producer of the show. That's a start; can you expand on this? Filming locations? Costs? Guest stars? Really, this area is critical to passing a GA, because it proves that the article is broad in its coverage. Or other stuff. Please, don't make the "Production" area one one sentence. One created, It must be summarized in the main paragraph
- I've turned it into a "note 3".
- Reception: Unneeded comma before Cheers
- References: Split into two columns by using the following code: {{Reflist|2}}