Talk:The Man in the Gray Flannel Suit II

I've marked this article as being biased and having an inappropriate tone. It should be an encyclopedic overview of the text, not a sloppy personal review. It need someone who has read it (or is familiar with it) to work on it, however, and I don't meet either of those qualifications. Beginning 19:51, 2 July 2006 (UTC)

((OPINIONATED)) This article is just someone's opinion — Preceding unsigned comment added by 155.48.185.181 (talk) 04:11, 9 December 2012 (UTC)

This isn't an article; it's a book review. Let's do some cutting of the subjective parts. NicholasNotabene (talk) 06:19, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Sloan Wilson had three child by his first wife and one by his second. The main character's life mirrored his own. His later fiction often was about, primarily or peripherally, young women involved with older men. But this needs to be included with references to published reviews or literary journals, etc., not just baldly asserted with no outside references. 2600:1004:B14C:D9B9:58ED:EC15:C5E5:7E85 (talk) 04:12, 25 January 2020 (UTC)