Talk:The Discovery of Heaven
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Chielbuseyne in topic Plot
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POV sentence edit
How to best make "The spirit of the book, the intense friendship between Max and Onno, the mystical journey of Quinten, are described very well." NPOV? It could be removed but perhaps it can be sanitized in some way? Frank Quist 03:13, 30 October 2005 (UTC)
What about the Saint Spirit/Holy Ghost? DEUS EX MACHINA? So different and amazing clear.
Terrible last paragraph, Wiki-unworthy — Preceding unsigned comment added by 145.116.10.222 (talk) 00:32, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
Plot edit
In my opinion, the plot is not too long, knowing that the book consists of 900 pages. kind regards, Chielbuseyne (talk) 16:47, 15 March 2013 (UTC).