Talk:The Call (2013 film)/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Mediran in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Mediran (talk · contribs) 11:55, 26 August 2013 (UTC) I will review. :)Reply

Review coming soon.

Thanks for taking the time to review! --1ST7 (talk) 22:14, 26 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Review edit

Infobox

 Y No problems here

Lead
  • First of all, the lead looks good. Anyway, please add brief information, about 2-3 sentences, about the film plot.
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:54, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Plot

 Y No problems here

Production etc.

 Y No problems here

Promotion and release
  • Please add the features for the DVD/Blu-ray release of the film.
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 18:13, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Reception
Box office
  • Change "According to Boxoffice.com, The Call..." to "According to Boxoffice, The Call..."
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:26, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Please introduce what "Rotten Tomatoes" is for those who're not familiar.
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:28, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Please add a review rating from "Metacritic".
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 18:03, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
Accolades
  • If possible, you can change the table into paragraph form to make it more encyclopedic and formal seeing that it only has 2 noms, making it more easy to change.
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:47, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
References
  • Ref 1. Do not italicize "British Board of Film Classification"
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:32, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Ref 12. You can change the "The Young, Black, and Fabulous: Celebrity Gossip" to either "Theybf.com" or "The Young, Black, and Fabulous" without the "Celebrity Gossip"
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:32, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Ref 13. Change "Box Office" to "Boxoffice"
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:32, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Ref 16. Change "Blue-ray.com" to "Blu-ray"
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:34, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Ref 18. Italicize "Variety"
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:38, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Ref 25. Either not italicize the "WWE" or change to "World Wrestling Entertainment, Inc."
  Done --1ST7 (talk) 17:38, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Ref 26. Is there an available URL for this ref? If there are, please add it. If there are not, please fix the parameters. Also, please don't italicize "Just Jared".
Unfortunately, I don't think a URL can be added. The other part is   Done though. --1ST7 (talk) 17:38, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply
BTW, I have added a URL from "AllVoices.com" which is from Just Jared.

Okay, I think everything's covered. --1ST7 (talk) 18:13, 30 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thank you 1ST7! :)
Final thoughts

First and foremost, thank you 1ST7 for improving this article a lot. Also, I think all of my comments above have been addressed and I think this should be passed! Again, thank you for giving effort and time to make this one a good article. Thanks and have a nice day and congratulations too! :) Mediran (tc) 00:53, 31 August 2013 (UTC)Reply

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