Talk:That's Not My... (book series)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:46, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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There isn't much to say, just some very minor copy issues and a suggestion to archive references. 7-day hold for Unexpectedlydian. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:46, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Hi @Sammi Brie, thanks so much for reviewing! I’ll be making these changes on my mobile so apologies if I’m a bit slower/sloppier than intended. I’ll ping you when I’m done. Unexpectedlydian^♯4talk^‽ 15:56, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

Since you're on mobile, I ran IABot for you. I see you've made all the copy changes, @Unexpectedlydian; is that all that was needed? Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:48, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

Thank you that’s super helpful :) Yes, that was everything! Unexpectedlydian^♯4talk^‽ 19:33, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

Lead

• Every book focusses on a different subject, which include animals, vehicles and people — "subject" and "include" don't agree in plurality. Maybe "which have included"?
  •  Done

Format

• Comma after (2011)
  •  Done
• brightly-coloured Adverb: don't hyphenate
  •  Done
• child and adult, and drop the comma. more: User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
  •  Done

Background

• Usborne executives where Add comma after "executives"
  •  Done
• He later changed his mind and the first book You need a comma after "mind" here
  •  Done

Reception

• Add comma after "United Kingdom" first sentence
  •  Done
• Add hyphen before "themed" to read That's Not My Meerkat...-themed bench
  •  Done

Other

• Archive references with IABot.
• No copyvio issues found by Earwig.
• The lone image is a fair use book cover with alt text.

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