Talk:Tea Leaves (Mad Men)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 14:49, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Issues:

• Intro: "though reaction was mixed toward the Betty plotline" I only read one of the reviews in the section that said the plotline was bad, whereas three others enjoyed it
• Plot: Some of the sentences, like "Several days later, the doctor calls back with her test results. The tumor is benign." and "Harry fails miserably at his attempt to meet with The Rolling Stones. Don doesn't mind." could be re-written into whole sentences (rather than two) to be less jumpy.
• Production: Is there any info on who wrote or directed the episode, or where the inspiration came from?

Those are the only issues I could find. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:37, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Problems have been sufficiently resolved. Passing.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:25, 22 April 2012 (UTC)